Ok, so my piece didn't exactly fit into the narrative of RE:VISIONS. My story is the book that Samantha is reading when she is riding on the train. I think the problem was the placement of my piece. I think it could have fit into the story better if my piece was straight cut into when she was looking at the pictures of the book, when the man's voice says "keep reading the book." and straight cut out of my piece into the train crash scene.

One thing that did work was the connection between the moon imagery from the overall narrative and the maroon moon in my piece. Some of the transitional parts of RE:VISIONS made me cringe, but overall, the narrative works, especially the parts where the recurrent images help to tie the whole thing together.